Revision Of Policy Memo

In the policy memo, clarify your criteria before introducing each policy option.
For each option, make sure you talk about and evaluate the options based on your selected criteria (3 criteria). And make your recommendation based on your evaluation.
In the policy memo, including a summary table (analytic table) after the three options analyses could be helpful for the receiver (not necessary, but think about it).
Overall, you did a good job, but you are missing some major parts of the policy memo. Try to read the policy memo rubric, S02 materials, and examples again, and check whether there is any part that you could improve and make sure you are including all major parts.