discussion board on Canvas, see this webpage: Do not use Pages, as those without a

Submit the draft of your to this discussion board before Please submit it as a Microsoft Word .docx or PDF. For instructions on how to attach a file to a discussion board on Canvas, see this webpage: Do not use Pages, as those without a MacBook would have trouble accessing your document. After you submit your draft to this discussion board, you are going to give peer review feedback to Since the purpose of this discussion board is for everyone to receive feedback, . Part of your peer review grade includes carefully selecting classmates with very little feedback, so that everyone gets feedback. To respond to a peer, follow these steps: Please make your comments in-text, using the tools at the top of the screen, and provide at least one comment per question below. Note that some questions require you to make more than one comment. 1. Look at the first sentence of the definition. Is it a one-sentence definition? Is it useful and helpful? Is there anything that could be improved about that sentence? 2. Read over the document. Identify each definition being used. on which strategy is being used (for example, negation, partition, analogy, etc.) and whether it is being used effectively. Was that strategy helpful? Was there anything confusing? Is there anything that could be better in that section of the document? 3. Consider the organization of the technical definition. Is there anything you think should be moved sooner or later in the definition? Remember that especially helpful information should appear sooner rather than later. Did everything come in an order that made sense to you? 4. Consider the formatting of the definition. Do you think think it is formatted in a way that invites a non-technical, professional audience to read and helps them to understand? Does the document appear professional to you? 5. Consider the language of the definition. Was it all easy to understand and follow? Does the writer avoid technical jargon? Were there any sections that just made no sense to you? 6. What were the strongest elements of the definition? 7. Summarize the elements of this document that need the most revision. Here’s how you’ll be graded: – Do you post a draft of your own paper and ? (5 points) – Do you leave helpful and thoughtful feedback for peers? Do you answer all the relevant questions? Do you focus on giving suggestions that will help the reader to improve? (10 points)